Wednesday, November 22, 2023

Reading and Writing, Ha Long Bay, Final Essay, Draft 1

 By Nate Feldman

This session, we have compared many different things.  Choose one of the topics below, and write a comparison essay.

1. Two types of leaders

2. Two types of businesses 

3. Two parks 

4. Two animals 

5. Two places to live 


Example essay:

Comparing Two Stores

Black Friday is the day when people go shopping in large numbers because of the discounts on different items.  If you go to a mall, you will see them thronged with hordes of people clamoring for the best items to purchase.  Whenever I go shopping, I go to Dick’s sporting goods for sports equipment and I go to Macy’s for clothing.  You would think they are so different, but actually they are quite similar. 

The biggest similarity between the two shops is that they both sell clothing items.  Although Dick’s is famous for also having sports equipment, such as baseballs, soccer balls, footballs, and bats, gloves, and other things, they also have a large selection of shorts, pants, shoes, socks, and even underpants.  Of course, Macy’s is famous for its clothing selection from top designers, such as Ralph Lauren and Hugo Boss.  So, either place is a good one to consider getting new apparel for yourself. 

While there are some similarities, as the one mentioned above, there are a multitude of differences as well.  First and foremost, Dick’s is a sporting good store whereas Macy’s focuses on all sorts of clothing for daily life.  Furthermore, Macy’s has other daily living needs, such as beds and furniture while Dick’s just has things connected to sports.  Thus, the type of people who come to these stores may be quite different.  Dick’s is far more likely to attract people who are athletes while Macy’s attracts everyone of all backgrounds. 


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